Wednesday, 4 February 2009

Hall Monitor

‘The Hall Monitor’


Short cut with sound of an alarm clock

INT. BEDROOM, DAY

Boy laying in bed, action figures seen around room. We see Melvin(Hall Monitor) leave his bed and walk off screen.


INT. BATHROOM - Looking In Mirror

MELVIN (Scene cuts between shots of Melvin in Bathroom to different scenarios that contradict what he has said)
(cool voice) ‘Hi, I’m Melvin (coughs)……..
(normally) I mean hi I’m Melvin. I’m 17, and
I’m a college boy and I love it!
I have so many friends' (cuts to classroom scene)

'I'm a ladies man'
(Shot of attractive woman coming out of gym, slow motion shot and provocative music, breaks back into reality to find Melvin breathing deep and staring intently)

Attractive Girl
'Hey there'

Melvin
'I..........uh........arggghhh'
(Melvins runs off holding crotch)

'And I am clearly the coolest kid in school' (smiles at himself in the mirror)
(shot of Melvin putting sash on and Waiting for students to exit classroom, we see him with speed monitor gun)

'I am the HALL MONITOR'
(Melvin ducks to spit in sink and we see Title scrren come up)